The Official Writing Challenge
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Very sobering perspective.
In my opinion, this is a demonstration of great thought-provoking writing. Right away you drew me in by usin descriptive words. When you make the lines active instead of passive and use verbs more than adjectives or adverbs, the words pop from the page and pull the reader in. You did a great job of writing on topic while delivering a potent message.
12/10/20
Wow, such food for thought. Well done and I hope this places high!