The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/20
I liked this analogy. It’s so hard to wait sometimes! Good job!
05/29/20
Good explanation to children about WAIT.
05/29/20
A good reminder for all of us!
06/01/20
Very creative dialogue and well-thought-out progression of making your point. I think kids would enjoy this story, as well as adults. Good job.
06/01/20
Great article!
Love your use of creativity on this topic.
Hope this places!
06/02/20
This is good and I hope it places. I can easily see this as a Sunday School lesson. Well done.