The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/20
Cute sentry! Your paragraphs would be easier to read if you would make double spaces in between. By the way, I've lived in California most of my life and we do not call it Cali!
You have a delightful sense of humor. One of my favorite college courses was human geography. One thing that was taught was how different regions use different words. You could use a little bit of tightening in your writing, but overall, I think you covered the topic in a fun way. Good job.
05/23/20
Good sense of humor! I agree, it would be easier to read if paragraphs were separated by a double space. Fun read!
05/26/20
Brought back memories!