The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/18
A great story and good writing. Our dog, too, has a special toy like Raleigh had the duck. Thank you for this story. God bless.
08/20/18
This has a lot of potential. Raleigh's idiosyncrasies are so interesting. But the spiritual application feels like an add-on. Don't give up on this piece. God just may surprise you with an insight that makes you chuckle.
08/20/18
I love your heart for sharing the Gospel. Well done.
The picture of Raleigh carrying his own leash certainly made me smile and brought back the memory of our then two-year-old asserting, "Me hold me own hand." And she did :)
Keep writing. The flow will come. God Bless.
08/23/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the Intermediate category, Judy.

What an intelligent dog--carrying his leash in his mouth. I'm glad the Great Comforter gave us a touch of comfort in this life.