The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/18
Wow. Well-told story. Indentations or space between paragraphs would make the story easier to read.
08/20/18
You did a great job with showing the urgency of the situation with the boys. A great illustration of God's protection and the loyalty of a beloved dog. God Bless.
You did a nice job of telling the story. The ending was great. The opening paragraph was a bit slow. Instead maybe start with more of a grabber, and then you can sprinkle the back story in little by little. Good job of writing on topic with a powerful message.