The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/18
Great job with this and with covering the topic. Nice introspective piece.
Blessings~
Great essay!
02/16/18
Well done. I really got a good picture of how loaded up you were!
Good job and nicely done. You were really loaded down :)
I enjoyed the comic situations and felt myself laughing either at the situation or the author. I could feel for the author but it was still humorous.

(How did you like Portland's airport?)

I hope you were rested and will come back again. Maybe in your next writing we will find out what was cooked in the pressure cooker.
This is delightful. Your descriptions are wonderful and paint a great picture. I don't think you needed your first paragraph as it was a bit slower than the rest, but overall you had me smiling until the end. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 11th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.