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03/10/17
Good job with the research and with the overall flow. I like how you emphasized the part of each individual to live out God's word.
03/10/17
Great message, well done.
When God is taken out of the equation of our lives, repercussions will follow, as your entry suggests.

Nicely said.

Blessings~
03/11/17
Thank you for your thoughts on this important subject. There was a lot to digest. A lot of good information. I would like to see your passion for this subject come to life with more active sentences instead of passive. Be creative and make your readers have the zeal you have by arousing the spirit in them with creative dialogue. God bless.
This is a well written piece exposing the cause of our troubles: Christians who have allowed their light to grow dim through their worldly living and worldly lifestyle.

We are dividing ourselves by the very Bible we claim contains the words which bring us peace. Political correctness is triumphing over truth because of our lukewarmness.
You make some good points for sure. Since this is nonfiction it's really important to have smooth transitions from section to section. Dint even be afraid to summarize your previous paragraph. For example:

Like-minded individuals have joined together to form alliances for centuries.
America has been founded on Biblical principles and we need to continue to support those groups today just as our forefathers had while penning the Constitution.

I like the points you made. There have been quite a few challenges that speak to the politics. Don't be afraid to make yours stand out if the box and be a bit different.

I also urge you to read and comment on other challenges as well. Not only will it help another writer, but you will be amazed at how much you learn as well. Keep writing always,