The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/16
I loved this. I have sat with those people when a missionary, but here it seems harder. I can only give you an A+.
08/25/16
I enjoyed reading this and it touched my heart. I too worry about the people on the corners, want to make it better for each one, but you are right about the fear and mistrust we feel. It has spurred me to find an opportunity to help in another way. Congratulations!
08/26/16
Man I can see why you got first place on this one. You described the plight of those that have lost hope.

Now, only Jesus can give hope where there is no hope. But how do we do that? I guess we help their physical needs and share the gospel with them.

Some hearts will be caught up in Christ, while others, for the life of them, are unable to catch the vision.

Keep on writing.
09/01/16
Congratulations, Sara, on your 1st place win in the Intermediate category.

My heart breaks for the wounded in our society. It is a complex problem because some use the money for alcohol and drugs and others for food for themselves and their children. Many of the homeless in our local mission are children.

Many of the police and sheriffs in our town hand out $5.00 gift cards for Subway, McDonald, Burger King, and others.
09/01/16
Very good story! This should be the aim of all Christian writers- to write the heart of God for mankind. You did a great job at expressing the love Christ has towards even the most entangled of us.

I liked the last line as it summed it up very nicely.

Congratulations!
09/06/16
Well done! Everything about your winning entry, from the title to its challenge to the body of Christ in a convicting yet loving manner, is superb.