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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Endless (01/09/14)
Your love my song
Oh How
The rivers of your goodness
Rejoice on and on
Into the waters of my fathers house
They lead

And upon his name
By His prescience
he restoreth me

And I sing the songs of his
Neverending Mercy
For his ways are the things of glory of which I see
And his love it
is my song!

You are lovely
In a robe of gold
You are wonderful
High up in your throne

For you are god
And yet you call me
To stand before you,
As your very own
And your love it is my song!

Oh I listen to the waters
Of your rivers flowing free
As I bask in the music of
Your love outpouring still fully

What love is this I sing
With arms upraised to thee?
For more it is,
than anything
A heart like mine had ever known
Covering Steadfastly

For Your love it is my song
And your worthiness reknown
Your joyfulness
Flows on and on..
Oh Your love,
it is my love song!

As I sit here in the archway
Of your endless praise
I can see how high your glories
Stored up for all my days
Oh how they soar so endlessly!

Oh my god you are my father
The star of every wonder
That I could see
You're prescience outstretched
That I should breathe in thee

There is no other one
that I behold
As your revelation
is of all That rolls
within the hillsides unto the seas

Your grace outstretched Through valleys
tumbling far and wide
As you sing your tune of majesty
Knowing I am your delight.

You are mighty,
As the flash of a majestic
Realm that rolls, rumbling
like thunder
Everything held
by your will
As your love it is my song!

For You are every salvation
And within you my cup is overfilled
How long I have Marvelled
The splendour of your creation
That stretches beyond skies

And I as renew my soul in you
I feel that your are life
Oh lord
For beautiful are your promises
You are good

I revell in the light
Of your unending peace
That could, heal a million
Wounds.

I swoon,
for It is my delight
That covers below
Above and underneath
Your worthiness, my plight!

Oh How Im Singing the song
of your renewing
Peace
As you flood out your
Miracles enduring,
to gush forth out over my feet

And I sing to you my God
who in grace, so sweet..
is my love song
Your glory resonates on and on

For your love oh god
It is my song
As it's here in your paths I stand
Knowing now where I belong
Made whole,
Held humbled
At your command
Oh it's in your song I stand.
For I how am made a better man,
When your love it is my song :)
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Date
Larry Whittington
01/18/14
I was not sure how to read your poem. It didn't seem to have regular breaks or punctuation to help me put it into a good rhythm.

Maybe that was what you intended. ??
Joanne Sher 
01/20/14
You have some beautiful imagery here, and I love your title/refrain. Enjoyed this very much.

I would watch your capitalization - it is pretty inconsistent, and was a bit distracting.

Thanks so much for sharing!
Sheldon Bass 
01/21/14
Thank you for the entry. You covered a lot of God's glorious traits and virtues. Keep on praising Him!
Toni Babcock 
01/22/14
As commented before, watch punctuation and capitalizations, also use spell-check. Nice imagery throughout, I could feel your heartfelt praise, but I got a little bogged down when it somewhat rambled too long. I really like the very last stanza the best - I feel that last stanza could stand on its own as a poem - something that would endure in the readers mind without getting lost in too many words - and as a poet, I think that is a good goal to attain.