The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/05
An clearly written, honest and sincere journal entry and prayer. You struggle with an issue that few people I know of have truly conquered. I like the way you come full circle and bring the reader back to the song. As a block of text, though, it is difficult to read. Help the reader along by breaking it down into its separate thought component. PM/email if you'd like me to show you what I mean.
10/21/05
Ooops, a, not an. I hide my head in shame! :-(