The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this! and it's an unusual story for me to want more of. Good job well told;with vivid characters. I was pulled in as though I was there.
Good job! I enjoyed this story. It was very well told, with convincing detail.
I thought this was good, too. I DO agree with Christine about the captain's name and the narrator's occupation.
Kathryn, congratulations on your Highly Commended Award for Level 2. Well done. You also ranked 24th overall (out of 135 entries), so that definitely deserves a big pat on the back. There really wasn't a great deal separating the top 30 entries. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)