The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/05
Okay, this is a good start. Break up the paragraphing with spaces, then make sure that dialog is in its own relative paragraph. Find someone to proof this and give you a good edit. The story has merit and with work could work into a meaningful piece.
10/19/05
This is a nice story. God provided blessings from the unlikeliest of places!