The Official Writing Challenge
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What an awesome story! Love it.
This was sheer delight. I almost expected the kids to see the Cat In The Hat but two kittens will have to do! Lovely job.
Fun stuff -- very Seuss reminiscent!
Delightful to read. Well done.
Really great rhyming, and a nice story thrown in! Shades of "Twas the Night Before Christmas..." Loved your word choices. I truly loved this!!
LOL -- I thought of "twas the night..." also. Very sweet; love your word choice, cadence, and the story it tells
What a fun tale. You completely captured my attention and my a smile "outbreak" on my face. Love this!
Purely delightful narrative poem!
I know nothing about poetry but I really enjoyed this one! Cute!
Delightful! So delightful! Wishing I had a child next to me right this moment, to share this with.
well done! the topic really lends itself to this humourous kind of approach :-).... looks like a winner:-)
I see shades of Robert Service here. Truly enjoyed this little rhyming/lyrical tale.
Congratulations for placing 10th in level two!