The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely story that held my attention the whole way through. I, too, kept wondering when her "wonderful day" would emerge!
what if indeed :-)every setback an opportunity for someone to bring blessing. An outbreak of a good kind well done.
I loved your story. I've had a few of those what if days and when everything is said and done they turned out to be one BIG blessing.
Great article, and I like the way you counted your blessings after all of the problems you were confronted with. Also, the people that blessed you will almost certainly feel blessed too.

Keep writing.
I absolutely loved this fast-paced story positive. What a wonderful and unique twist on the topic.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level two!