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Topic: Year(s) (01/20/11)
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TITLE: The Years Go By | Previous Challenge Entry
By Steven Kellen
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At the time I knew the poem was not finished, but I didn’t have anything else to say. Now, 20 years later, she accepted the proposal of a young man from Alaska and became engaged on New Year’s Eve. So now I have reason to add to the poem, though it still remains unfinished.
AS THE YEARS GO BY
IN MOMENTS OF TIME
I walked in the door 9-28-93
and caught her by surprise.
Clutching the phone;
wrapped in the cord
Clutching the words;
rapt in the moment.
“The Call Of The Wild,”
on a late September evening.
“The Young And The Restless,”
on the phone in the entry.
“The First Time Ever I saw Your Face.”
The first time ever he called her at home.
...and the mysteries of the future,
call to us out of the past...
first loves;
fast friends;
yearning hearts;
treasured memories;
stirred emotions;
“New Beginnings.”
So close,
yet so far.
Haunting visions,
of the past,
today.
Todays became tomorrows 1-20-2011
of days gone by.
The girl became a woman
wrapped up in life.
Teaching preschoolers
rapt in her words.
He stood under the stars
and caught her by surprise
With bombs busting in air
In the dawns early light
A Start Spangled Banner
On a New Years night.
...and the ring of the new year
became a ring on her finger
lasting loves;
fast friends;
yearning hearts;
treasured memories;
stirred emotions;
“New Beginnings.”
So close,
yet so far.
Haunting visions,
of the past,
today.
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you wrapped me up in the poem too. I have a 16yr old daughter almost 17 who knows what will unfold in 20 years time.I think so many people will identify with this snapshot of a moment