The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title fits this article very well. I think it is a real temptation to write things that would make us popular authors with this world, instead of with Christ. I'm glad that you allowed your character to discover the truth, because her discovery has helped me see the truth as well. :)
I really enjoyed this piece. The dialog really drew me in and the bits of character descriptions here and there made it interesting. I wanted to keep reading to find out what kind of creatures the characters were and to find out what Sian had written that was objectionable. In the end I liked it was good that you never told us what Sian wrote because there was a far more important point to be made.
As always...very entertaining with a great message. These playful little fairies are so fun and I can picture each one, so well!
Loved the title. It fit the story to a tee. Truth always trumps fiction and some fiction is enough to curl peoples hair. Enjoyed this immensely.