The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
Cute.
10/23/09
lovely title. I liked the initial paragraph of description too!
Loved this very much. Your use of the word black was refreshing. Thank you.
10/27/09
Great title--I'd love to see you use the full 750 words on this, and to make it more of a story, with fully developed characters and dialogue. It's got a lot of promise!
10/27/09
hahahah. nice story. unfortunately...i can see myself doing something like that.
01/23/10
Apt.Concise.Very good. I enjoyed reading it.