The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice dialog. It seems like a big change in personality for one encounter. Maybe if you would just open the door a crack and let the blind girl feel hope. Just something to think about. Best wishes with this piece.
Nice twist at the end. Didn't see it coming.
Having read the end I understand the title even better. The end was unexpected and the dialogue was interesting. I think the little girl got hope.
You've done a wonderful job of showing what "blind faith" is really about. I didn't foresee the ending either. Great Work!
Alan, this was a terrific entry in the Challenge with a wonderful twist. I'm a bit late getting around to let everyone know, but I wanted to make sure you knew that you made it into the semi-finals for the Sightseeing Challenge. Be encouraged and keep rising to the Challenge! I'll look forward to seeing more from you. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)