The Official Writing Challenge
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08/16/05
A nice start, I might have put the paragraphs in chronological order, especially ending with that verse. It might have flowed a bit better. Good descriptions :)
08/16/05
Nice entry. If we appreciate the glory that God has presented to us on earth, so much more shall we enjoy what He has in store for us in heaven.