The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story. I pray this scenario will become a norm for many more parent/child relationships.
Excellent writing in this piece.
Who's diary? That was my only question--why is Catherine's diary at her Mom's house? Otherwise, a very well written piece.
Lovely story, really enjoyed reading it. Well done.
I liked this story lots. One thing you need to watch is repeating the word mother. There was one paragraph where it became really distracting. The story got wrapped up really fast with a very pretty bow but you might not have wanted to do that. It went a little too fast, a tad unbelievable. I do like happy endings, though:)