The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/09
I really like this poem. I especially like the alliteration you use in various areas of the poem. I often write my poetry in lower case and was pleased to see this one written that way. We can't always get away with it, but I think this is one where you can. Excellent read! Laura
07/16/09
Nice cadence, making for an easy read.
Enjoyable to read & contemplate.
07/17/09
This poem awakens my senses, bidding them recall
all the times they too, sensed the presence of the Lord,in similar situation. Great job.
07/17/09
I love the last line of each of your stanza. Very encouraging to the heart!
Thanks for this poem.
07/17/09
lovely!
07/18/09
I enjoyed your poem very much...It was very descriptive, and flowed well.
Lisa
What a beautiful poem. I enjoyed this so very much. Thank you for such a lovely poem.
07/20/09
Beautiful worship-like a psalm. Thank you.
Beautiful. I feel drawn to Him after reading this. Well done!

Congratulations!!
07/23/09
congrats on your level placing!
07/23/09
Truly worshipful. Soft, loving, peaceful, true, deep, refreshing...something to feed on for awhile. Love it.
Mona
07/23/09
Hearty congratulations on your EC. I enjoyed reading this. You captured so many aspects of summer and worked in the facets of Jesus' love for us so appropriately. I don't always like devotional writing as after a while it all starts to sound the same, but there was something fresh and lovely in this. Well done indeed!
07/23/09
I love the sheer rich beauty of this. There's a wonderful, worshipful feeling of peace and serenity about it. Congratulations on your EC!!
This is beautiful. Congratulations & God Bless!
07/23/09
Absolutely beautiful!
07/24/09
Wonderful thoughts which deserve a resounding "AMEN."
07/24/09
When I read this poem the first time, I guessed in my heart that it would be a winner. I'm glad it's on EC. Congratulations!
07/26/09
And wow, it's in the first place in level 2 as well. You'll move to advanced level, then. Congratulations, indeed!
07/31/09
This poem captivated my senses and it's worthy of reading over and over again. Great job and congratulations on your win.