The Official Writing Challenge
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A funny story. I giggled and laughed. Excellent imagination! Thanks!!
I like the humor in your story. It's fun to read and at the same time, it reminds me that Barnes and Nobles is also one of my favorite place to hang out, not to mention Taco Bell afterwards. Smile!
Adorable! Great work! Hey, we're neighbors!
I like the humor. An editor can clean up some of the grammar, but an otherwise enjoyable piece.
Having read Maurice Sendak's book at least a million times to my 4 kids, I found this a fun and lively application!!!
Hey, I think you spelled the cappuccino noise just fine! This brought back to me how much time I would spend at my own BN store. Thanks for sharing!
Funny and well-written. And with 6 males in my household I can relate totally! Keep writing - I'd love to see more.
I really enjoyed this--it was great! I've never read the book you quoted, but I still enjoyed the quotes worked in. :-)