The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative! You have a few spots that are needing punctuation, but I enjoyed reading this. Good job.
08/03/05
I liked the way you described your story.
Especially: The picture on the second page of your passport book will look like a new creature, not who you were but who in Christ you have become.
Really! God bless ya, littlelight
08/07/05
A nicely written piece :)