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TITLE: Mr. Smiley | Previous Challenge Entry
By Jan Warrick
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“Who is this man?” she whispered. Slowly she turned each page. Carefully recorded were the names and dates of the places he visited. “I wonder what he did in all those places”, she said quietly to no one in particular.
“He traveled the world with the love of his life”, a gentle voice answered back.
Startled, she looked up. “How do you know that?” she asked the young man sitting before her.
“Here” he said, “Take a look at this.”
Handing her a thick, leather bound book, he continued, “You can see some of the places he has been”.
The old leather creaked as she opened the album he had handed her. Black and white photos, yellowing on the edges, were taped four to each page. Smiling from each photo was the man who’s passport she had just looked at. He was younger when these pictures were taken, she thought. “Where do you think this is?” she asked.
“That is Egypt”, said her visitor. “And those are the pyramids”
“Mighty silly looking, don’t you think?” She shook her head as she turned another page.
“He took his bride there on their honeymoon”, the young man explained. “That’s her right there”, he said as he pointed to the beautiful young woman standing next to Harold Smiley.
“She looks very happy”, said the woman.
“She was very happy”, the man replied. “Harold and his wife loved telling me about their adventures, and they had many.”
“Can you tell me one of those adventures?’
“I would love to, but I have to get back to work now.”
Picking up the old passport, the woman handed it to the young man. “Here”, she said, “you better get this back to Mr. Smiley. He might be missing it.”
“Mr. Smiley doesn’t need it anymore. He has taken the best trip ever and is waiting for his bride to join him when she can.”
“Oh I see”, said the woman a little confused. Looking back at the book, she turned another page, lost in her own thoughts.
Standing up, the young man stepped next to her and kissed the top of her head. “I will see you tomorrow mom. I can tell you one of your adventures then.”
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Jan, your story was beautiful and touched me on a personal level. Great job.
Bill