The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Bermuda should have you hired. I'm ready to pack my bags!
I totally agree with the first two comments; Bermuda is another one of God's jewel oasis' in the beautiful world He created. Well done another great piece of writing!!! ( I'm sure you wrote this Wendy??)
I feel like I just visited Bermuda. This was truly wonderful to read. I felt like I was part of your group. Thanks!
07/12/05
Beautifully written!
07/15/05
I really enjoyed being on the beach in Bermuda with you. Thank you for describing such a beautiful picture.
God bless, littlelight
07/15/05
A very nice story- wonderful imagse.
Great description with the added punch brought about by sharing the experience with your sponsor child. Gentle and yet exciting as the walk unfolds...
07/16/05
This was perfection. I loved, "a little cup of summer." I agree about the Bermuda Tourism folks...that SHOULD hire you! :0)