The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Brilliant, Amusing and Tender. "What a Poem!" You really have the gift!
Keep on developing that "talent" that the Master has given you. The glory of God shines through this wonderful story of loves victory.
06/14/05
I'm not always drawn in by poems, but this one kept me to the end.
A very moving account of how we should savor the moments we have with our loved ones. All too soon they have left us, but their memories fill us to overflowing. Very well done!
06/15/05
Nicely done! good rhythm, rhyme and heart
06/15/05
Very clever poem with a wonderful message. Although I think the father would want his son to keep playing too!
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
I enjoyed your poem immensely. Great work!
I loved your poem. Felt happy, then sad, then happy, then sad again. Nice job.