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A wonderful accolade to your father. What a treasure in your life! I enjoyed reading this so much.
06/14/05
I was caught up in the story from the first line. A great tribute to your Dad. Thanks.
What a wonderful tribute to your father. How special that he helped to baptize you. The way you tied the description of your father on earth and our Father in heaven was very moving.
06/15/05
What a blessing of a Dad!
06/15/05
Wonderful entry! I enjoyed reading this heartwarming tribute to your dad. I look forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
What a wonderful man. I especially, liked the connection of sidelines. Nice Job.
My favourite line: "You see, in any other situation my dad could barely be heard. In fact, I would often join in with my brother and mom in making fun of Dad’s small voice."

I was sure I'd already commented on this piece as it touched me when I first read it.

Great picture of a dad's love breaking out of the mould to express his love for you.
06/20/05
Enjoyed reading this piece, Robert. Like the use of the layered phrases like: 'trenches of life'.