The Official Writing Challenge
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Great Bible story for this proverb, and a clever poem.

I'm a little bit worried about your use of "crawl" and "walk"--maybe using the proverb too much? But I really liked the progression through the poem, and the last 4 lines are simply outstanding.
Being that I cannot produce a lick of poetry, I love reading those who can and it amazes me. I loved your story and I love poetry that has rhyme as well as rhythm. Loved your poem. For some reason found the first couple lines a bit of stumbling and not sure reason, but just loved it once I got into rhythm.
A very good interpretative poem on David and Goliath, well done!
Ideal for this week's subject.
The title grabbed my attention (not because of the all caps, but because of the wording). The last 4 lines paint a wonderful image. Clever.
Some good parts, or points, needs tweaking in a lot of areas but the message is there.
I LOVED it. "How dare they mock God in this way...I will bring him down this day."
Great poetry. Great use of the subject. Keep writing. I do poetry too (just not as good as yours.)

Congratulations on your EC !!!! :) A big finish after all!!!!
Wonderful poem with a super cute ending moral. Congrats on your EC!
Welcome to Advanced. Your talent shows in this entry. I look forward to being bested by you in Level 3.