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This character would be right at home in the Mitford series. It would be interesting to see his growth.
10/19/07
Very entertaining. I enjoyed your names on the groups at church.
10/21/07
This was wonderful! I love your characters. Thought surely this man was delivering a pregnant woman to the hospital or maybe his breaks were out in his car. How funny that he was just trying to get to church on time. Very good...
Laury
10/21/07
Lovely characters and setting gives this story a real punch. It's humorous and homey; very appealing.