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It sounds like the reporter was the beast based on her bias'. Cute story. Possibly a future Christian romance in there. A few spots were a little confusing but overall nice read.
02/23/07
Yes, cute story. I could really see the bodybuilder.
02/23/07
Well written with a good message about first impressions and stereotypes. Like someone else said, I could see this as the start of a Christian romance.
02/23/07
Good descriptions. I liked the twist of the reporter's first stereotypes and then finding out that the bodybuilder isn't like that...
I agree with all the above. It does seem to need more story here. Good writing.
02/28/07
I really enjoyed this story! The detailed descriptions made the body building character real for me--I could just see him--and the clever dialogue brought both characters to life in a delightful way. Wonderful humor and great message about stereotypes!

The title also sparked my curiosity--I had to know who the "beast" was, and why! (Am guessing it's possibly the rather blunt narrator?) Great job!