The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/07
A great way to present this topic. The start of the new paragraph "Imagine with me again" probably could use a different start just to stay fresh but it's a minor point. Nice.
01/26/07
I particularly liked this sentence: ...with just a few of his masterful brush strokes the painting is changed into a heavenly body.... Really nice writing here and throughout.