The Official Writing Challenge
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What wonderful description of the painting and the situation. From start to finish an excellent read!
Great description. I love the glimmer of hope you gave us at the end.
This left me wanting more! I could picture Ryan's work, Perry's heart and Ryan's pain. Well done.
This is gorgeous! I love the paragraph where Ryan pays attention to God's voice, telling him to wait...and the description of the painting and the dream--everything was just perfect. Very strong entry.
A wonderful, heart-warming read. Well done!
Your descriptions and writing are fantastic! Great job!
This is really good. I'm surprised it didn't place. But the competition is fierce.
A fine piece. I agree--it should have placed higher than sixth.
You should know, Sherrie, that I still remember this piece. Loved it then, still do! Thanks for reminding me of it again.