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By lynn rodgers
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He rejects her
Anne cries inside
Why can’t she be loved?
Lord rescue us
From this sin
We’re drowning in
Clay studies all night
He gets just a B+
Clay cries inside
Why can’t he be perfect?
Lord rescue us
From this sin
We’re drowning in
Sam uses her blade
She is bleeding deep
Sam cries inside
Why can’t the pain die?
Lord rescue us
From this sin
We’re drowning in
Kyle smokes his joint
He gets so high
Kyle cries inside
Why can’t he stay high?
Lord rescue us
From this sin
We’re drowning in
Brooke starves for a day
She’s skin and bones
Brooke cries inside
Why can’t she be thin?
Lord rescue us
From this sin
We’re drowning in
Proverbs 3:5-6 Trust in the LORD with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding; in all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your paths straight.
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I loved your poem, the way you set it up, and the insights it gives the reader.
With mixed emotions I say Bravo! and Lord help today's children.