The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/06
Awesome piece! I really enjoyed the creative names and characters behind them. You did an awesome job painting an effective picture of mankind. I especially liked the fact that you made me laugh with a very serious piece! Great ending!
11/20/06
This was a creative entry that showed the Anti-Christ at his best. We've seen these magic makers on TV these days. They save or serve no one but themselves. I was confused, though. Was Sandy in church, napping in the pew? Was Elijah a pastor? Good job with the topic, though.
Loved this! It was great and engaging to read, I got a little confused between Elijah and Lazarus Johnson, was that a typo or two different characters? Otherwise, a great read! :)
11/21/06
I loved this story! Beautiful, original analogy and great description and dialog. I noticed one name slip-up--the drowning child is usually Elijah, but at one point is called Lazarus(?). Also in one quote, the close quotation marks came before the actual quote was finished.
11/22/06
The Elijah and Lazarus mix-up threw me off - never did get back into the flow. Will come back when have more time and try to make heads and tails of this obviously good story.
11/23/06
I too was a little confused with the names, but dreams can be confusing. The message that mankind can be duped by Satan and his showy display was well presented.