The Official Writing Challenge
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i liked this ALOT
08/26/06
Keeping your eyes on the cross--no better place!

Words like "eyes" that are simple plurals (more than one) do not need an apostrophe. If you publish this elsewhere, I'd encourage you to go through and edit out those pesky apostrophes.

Sweet, tender little poem.
I loved this line, I keep my eye’s on the cross, and your path under my
feet.
Awesome poem. May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write for the glory of Him!
I enjoyed the fresh modern language of this poem.It conveyed such a powerful truth. I know some teenagers who would enjoy this because it is language they understand and a truth they need to hear.