The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/06
This is powerful writing, because the opening story takes the idea from the abstract and puts us in the middle of something we could experience, ourselves, horrible as it is to contemplate. You've done a great job, here!
05/02/06
"Let's imagine" ... what a start to a story with a horrible twist and a comparison to Jesus' death. You have a good writing skill and can well define your thoughts.
05/04/06
Great writing. Loved your development.
06/01/06
Great story and a great lesson in forgiveness and humility.