The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story, and wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing.
01/17/06
I found it amazing that this woman could be at such peach so quickly after her abandonment. Remarkable spiritual maturity and strength.
01/17/06
Beautiful, really touching. I liked the title as well-perfect with the story. You did an excellent job with the story. God bless you! littlelight
01/17/06
Her emotions were portrayed nicely. I liked many of your descriptive sentences too. Your story had a nice flow to it as well. :)
01/18/06
Excelent story, you've defently captured the feeling.
Keep Writing!