The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/05
I like this; it's written in a relaxed, matter-of-fact, authentic voice, and it has a tidy lesson. I don't think you need the parentheses; it would read just as well if those sentences did not have them, and there are quite a few for such a short piece. Good job!
01/23/06
This was a light hearted, easy read with a truthful but fun messsage. Thanks for sharing.