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TITLE: Only a Hug will do | Previous Challenge Entry
By carolann renaud
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Drifting off into a light rest I was poked on the shouder and brought out of my reverie. A small fragile looking woman asked if she could sit next to me. Pulling my bag off the seat I mumbled back to her, "of course". "I'm flying to Providence to see my family, have you ever been there?" she questioned and continued before I could answer, "I grew up there". She went on about various things in her personal life while I endured the monologue; smiling and nodding so as not to appear as disinterested as I was. Suddenly our flight was boarding and I found myself relieved at the thought of parting company with this little chatterbox. Finding a window seat I stowed my bag and grabbed the blanket provided by the airline. Snuggling down I prepared to sleep. However, my hopes for a quiet few hours were dashed with a familiar poke on my shoulder and the movement of the small body lowering into the seat next to me. "O, isn't it nice that we can sit together on our flight"? she beamed. With a sigh I straightened up and nodded my head. Resigned to endure yet more words from this stranger, I absently rubbed my temples trying to avert a headache that was coming on. She noticed and immediately became concerned for any distress I was experiencing. For a brief moment I sensed my own dear mother's heart. She always put us children ahead of herself whenever she thought we needed some kind of comfort. This little woman put her hand on me and asked if something was wrong? I couldn't hold back the rising flood of grief and just let it roll over the both of us. With tears in her eyes she listened as I told her of losing my mom and not having the chance to say "I love you" one more time. She was quiet for a few moments then told me of her loss. She had a daughter about my age who passed not more than a month ago. She whispered that she was going to Providence to be in a elder care home near her son. She was very close to her daughter and told me that she was feeling quite low till she saw me. She said, "Jesus answered my prayer". "What prayer was that"? I asked. She answered, "well, I didn't know till I saw you. But Jesus knows the deep down things and answers them." "I know now, I needed to see someone like you and have a little talk together and may even a little hug for each other." She took a deep breath, "what do you think"? she asked timidly. " It could be kinda like from your mom and my daughter There were no words that could express what was in my heart; only a hug would do.
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Nice ending.
Beautifully written, lovely lovely lovely.
God bless~
I believe the first sentence needs to be written. It sounds as if the flight is blinking and not the lights of the flight board.
The number one should be spelled out.
White space between paragraphs would have made the story easier to read.
You are a gifted story teller.