The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
I believe this world really does need a resolution revolution.

Keep writing!
01/16/16
This was a good devotional. I noticed "stop gossiping less". I assume it was supposed to be "stop gossiping"? There were punctuation errors; a few spots where you could have used a semi-colon instead of a comma for easier comprehension. Keep working at it.
01/16/16
Love it "Resolution Revolution" excellent!

Well done...good job with the topic and great message.

God bless~
You make some wonderful points. While I personally believe if it's important to me it's important to God, I also realize that there may be other things he is prompting me to change, but I don't really listen because I'm set in my ways. You reminded me to be more open to hearing Christ's voice.

My main red ink is this is at least the 5th piece this week that says pretty much the same thing. One of the best pieces of advice was found in Jan's Writing Basics on the forums. She suggested when you see the topic, write down your first five ideas, then throw them away because they are likely the same things everyone else thought of. If you really feel led to write that message, try to make it stand out. For example, perhaps tell the story from the dog's POV (point of view). It sounds silly at first, but it would make it stand out. For example: Another promise, she can't keep. I just don't understand why she does the same thing every year. As her faithful companion, I know God might be more concerned with her anger issues than her ten pounds on her backside.

On the positive side, you definitely nailed the topic. Even though I've read others like this, you do give sound advice, and I can feel your passion in your words. I'd urge you to read and comment on other entries in this level and in level four, and don't get discouraged. Keep writing. Let your subtle sense of humor shine through. I love your last line. It made me chuckle and it gave me hope. Great job.