The Official Writing Challenge
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Our ways are not always God's ways.

We need reminded this from time to time.

Well written.
11/08/15
I have sometimes said things I have regretted. This usually happens when I fail to listen to God and just go off on a tangent.
Your ending was very well done.

Make sure to double space between paragraphs. The beginning of your story had a lot of information dumping in it (Try more showing and less telling).