The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting article. I could easily see you expand it into a Bible or small group study. The only red ink I might offer would be aware of starting sentences with And or But. I know it's becoming more commonplace in informal articles or in dialog, but this felt like a more formal piece to me, and it distracted me slightly. You did a great job of writing on topic. I liked the examples you gave for each article of armor. Your Bible verses were great matches for your messages.
05/28/15
This is a nice devotional. I like how you backed up each piece of armor with other Scripture - telling how it will help the Christian stand strong in his faith.