The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/14
A well written and interesting devotional. Factual and informative. Truthful and compassionate.

Thanks for sharing.
08/09/14
Wisdom abounds in this powerfully written devotional, with truth, and important messages throughout.

Well done.

God Bless~
08/11/14
Lots of stuff to think about.

I could feel your passion for God in this writing. You emptied your soul for us.

Thank you
You show your love for God and his word. Really strong. I like it.
08/12/14
Your wording is good throughout this piece. No doubt God has blessed you with a strong aptitude for writing!

May I suggest, next time instead of telling the reader these things, relate a personal experience that show these things as truth? It is always more powerful and interesting when you put a story with it—like Jesus did.

Hope that helps in some way. Keep on writing, you are a blessing!
Beautiful. I especially loved:
"Jesus has been my faithful friend even during the times that I tried to push Him away. He would not allow me to go to the left of His center for very long before reeling me back into His arms. I never have been able to resist that heavenly tug..."
08/13/14
Devotional writing is one of many important ways to express yourself and God's directing your life.
In today's fast paced world sometimes a short devotional is all the bread we have time to chew.
Keep writing and sharing your gift.
Nice job. I liked your strong word and phrasing choices. "The 'God of heaven's armies' has kissed us with His gifts of mercy and grace" was one of my favorites!

I wonder if it might flow more smoothly if you changed "Hatred/Indifference" to "hatred or indifference", or something similar. The slash seemed to interrupt the reading process a little bit. But it might well be just me!

At any rate, this is a very insightful piece. I look forward to more of your writing.
This is a nice devotion. I especially liked the prayer. You did a nice job of selecting Bible verses to enhance your message. You should think about submitting some devotions to the FW daily devotions.