The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/14
I so enjoyed this poem!
Well done and great job.

God bless~
05/05/14
Loved the "angry bird" lines. Enjoyed your poem.
Very nicely done. I like the give and take feeling through out.

Good work with line length and rhyming words that fit well. The lines don't feel "forced". Good natural flow.

I think what you said really fits well in poetic form best. Just like you put it.