The Official Writing Challenge
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That was great, thank you for sharing! I know what you mean about learning the same thing over and over and OVER again! Praise God for His patience and that ultimately, it's His "score" on the exam that counts, not ours.
09/24/13
Great devotional! I especially liked your next to the last paragraph. Very thought provoking!
09/26/13
Excellent! Definitely something to think about,and so many of us can relate.

If you're having trouble with word count, you might want to re-read your article and put in contractions wherever possible. That will free up space for a few more words sometimes, plus it's more the way of conversational voice, if that's what you're looking for, of course.

Enjoy the break and see you back in October!
Wow! This is a powerful message. I have tears in my eyes. While reading I was thinking how I could understand the Israelites; I've gotten mad at God a few times. Then when I read your jump in the water part, I laughed out loud.

I did stumble a bit over the Part B part. It took me a few reads to get it. When I did, I thought it was brilliant. I might encourage you to have someone read it out loud and if they stumble, then you may want to rework it.

All in all I think you did a great job. I could totally relate to your message. Congratulations for placing 7th in your level! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)