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Topic: Communication Breakdown (12/16/10)
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By Shawn McNamara
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His thoughts to him so clear,
No mind readers in here.
Can’t understand why she isn’t catching on,
Something’s obviously wrong,
He’s feeling all alone.
He gets up leaves the room and busies himself with other tasks
He would open up and share his burdens if she would only ask.
We’re having a communication breakdown
A relational let down
And it’s working its way to my heart.
A lack of courage stirs the silence,
And it’s all together frightening,
It’s so clear to him …
How is it she doesn’t seem to see?
He’s growing tired, can’t stand being bossed around,
It creates an instant frown,
And quickly shuts him down.
Can’t understand why she isn’t catching on …
Something’s obviously wrong,
He’s left the room, she’s all alone.
He wonders if she even notices that he isn’t there.
He waits to see if she comes looking … to let him know she cares.
We’re having a communication breakdown
A relational let down
And it’s working its way to my heart.
A lack of courage stirs the silence,
And it’s all together frightening,
It’s so clear to him …
How is it she doesn’t seem to see?
She talks to him like he’s a child
She puts him down, her words are wild
What will it take for her to open up her eyes?
He lights himself on fire.
Hopes the smoke it bothers her.
It only burns him up some more.
We’re having a communication breakdown
A relational let down
And it’s working its way to my heart.
A lack of courage stirs the silence,
And it’s all together frightening,
It’s so clear to him …
How is it she doesn’t seem to see?
He sits in silence, wonders if anybody hears,
His thoughts to him so clear,
No mind readers in here.
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