The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Facinating...
I'm interested to know why you think God wanted you to have a dress and why things turned out the way they did. A little more information would help the reader.
I like your title. Keep writing.
10/09/09
Very intruiging story! It shows that sometimes God surprises us with special gifts just to make us happy. Thank you for sharing this with us!
10/10/09
Isn't it fun when the Lord tells us to do something nice like that?

I'd encourage you to do more careful proofreading; you had several spelling and capitalization errors.

And definitely KEEP WRITING and learning from the others on this site!
10/15/09
thank you.Good subject matter and a well told little story . You need to check some of your spelling and when you are ready start wring a little more. description of what the dress was like how it felt what material and so on would be a good way to beging to devlop your writing further.