The Official Writing Challenge
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LOL! Oh the trauma of a first bra! The poor thing, what an experience. I loved the very last line, had me laughing out loud for real. great job!
07/25/09
Very cute story! I liked how you integrated Olga and Dagmar into the story.
07/30/09
I have a good laugh on this one. Your title is eye-catching. The development of your story is awesome. The inner struggle of a young girl with her first bra has been very well - expressed. Good job!