The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely. Thanks for sharing.
Some very great truths here.
I think you meant four LEAF clover? I am no poet so I admire those who can write poetry!
06/10/09
some good lines here. Particularly the opening which almost sounds like a hymn! It does have a variation of styles and rhyming though which makes it a little disjointed to read. Sometimes keeping the same ryhmnig scheme throughout will make the poem flow better, or even try free verse where you dont even have to rhyme. That sometimes works well in this type of peice as you can just let it flow!