The Official Writing Challenge
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This was pretty good. A nice, short collection of thoughts.

Just my own personal preference though, after the first few times, I got tired of the quotation marks around the topic words. Otheriwse, good job!
Very good start to this! Maybe some personal examples would have filled it out and made it even more awesome.Nicely done.
It was pretty good, although I got annoyed with the quotation marks around bitter and sweet really fast.
06/10/09
good factual summary of the transforming power of Christ in a persons life. The gradual change reather than the dramatic. thanks